I Remember South Brighton*
& we built a bonfire
on the sand dunes
between the suburbs
& the sea
& you were on the opposite
side of the flames frustrated
about a woman
& all I could hear was
the driftwood crackling
in the fire & the waves
cutting into the land
the cold air fingering
our backs biting
our necks
& to my left
the houses against the sea front
were toy models sitting
in a dark room
& the sky was a black
smothering blanket
with threads of light
& the keg wasn’t dry
so we continued the party
drinking the dregs
washed up on the shore
& we were hoping
things would get better now
we were starting university
& we stayed there
till the dawn
Joanne Fisher
*South Brighton is a suburb in Christchurch.
Wonderful!
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Nicely written, good flow. I also like how you start the stanzas with the & symbol.
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