Visit (poem)





this house crumbles

in my hand


& you are there


you nonchalantly

pick up the door handle

from the ground

unable to hide

the peeling dull green paint


the rust remains

of your family

in the garden


Joanne Fisher


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5 thoughts on “Visit (poem)

    1. I find your interpretation quite intriguing. I don’t think poetry should be didactic so whatever you see in it is valid in my opinion. Writers can be blinded by their own reasons why they write a particular piece and not see other ways to view it. I wrote an essay about this early on in my blog…

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