The Unexpected
The vampire advanced towards her. Rebecca was backed into a wall. The vampire smirked. It had her now. Rebecca grabbed one of the pottery shards from a shelf beside her and just as the vampire grabbed her, Rebecca drove the shard into the vampire’s heart. The vampire looked surprised and turned into a cloud of dust. Rebecca sighed and walked to the door.
“Stupid vampire.” She said.
“Stupid human!” Said a voice behind her.
Rebecca turned to see the vampire she had killed with a dark smile on it’s face, just as she felt it’s icy hands on her.
Joanne Fisher
This is a second piece I’ve written using the prompt shards from the Carrot Ranch January 24 Flash Fiction Challenge.
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Well done, a most entertaining piece of writing.
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Thank you ❤
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Excellent.
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Oh! A wonderfully written horrific twist, Joanne! Great use of emotion, too.
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Thanks ❤
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Oh heck yes! That twist totally me out of no where! I love it!
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Nice twist. Or should I say turn?
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😀
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Wasn’t expecting that ending. Wow! Great flash!
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Now I know that when I ‘kill’ a vampire, I’d better not make assumptions. Great twist at the end!
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