The Shoreline
Aalen’s path took her northwards. As she went further the forest became more sparse until she came to the shoreline of a wide sea. She had never seen the ocean before and although her sight was partially obscured by the sea-mist hanging around the shore it looked as though it went on forever. She began to realise the world was far larger than she had ever dreamed. Where there other distant shores? Her heart yearned for revenge, but also to explore this world she barely knew. She watched the tumultuous waves and then turned away following the tracks eastward.
Joanne Fisher
This was written with the prompt sea mist provided by the Carrot Ranch January 31 Flash Fiction Challenge
You can follow Aalen’s story in these previous episodes:
1. Hidden 2. Returning 3. Burying the Dead
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Oh man, I hope she gets revenge. This is shaping up to be a true hero(ine)’s journey!
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Your flash has intrigued me and I’m off to read more about Aalen’s journey.
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Choices, choices, she chooses the path of revenge. Well told.
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Joanne, I like how you are using the prompts as a touchstone to lead into your story. I feel like we are on this journey with Aalen.
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Thanks. I’ll try to make the prompts help with the creation of the story as best I can.
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