Big Splash
Esther took pride in her swimming. She could move through the water like a torpedo. She reckoned no one was faster than her as she swam through the warm waters building up speed.
Her long dark hair trailed behind her as she sped upwards. She broke through the surface leaping into the air and then diving back under with a big splash. As she plummeted downwards she turned around again and built up speed once more.
Breaking through the surface a second time her silver fish tail gleamed in the sunlight before she disappeared under the water again.
Joanne Fisher
This was written with the prompt big splash provided by the Carrot Ranch June 4 Flash Fiction Challenge.
Dang it was hard to find an image with the only the front half of the swimmer visible…
I just read another mermaid tale by Liz! You two great writers must think alike!
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I haven’t seen that one yet.
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Just read Liz’s one. It was really good.
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Both interesting takes! 🐟
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I didn’t expect the fishy tail/tale. 🙂
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Good. I was wanting it to be a twist 🙂
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Or should I say a surprise?
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It was, yes, it was
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Yay! Mermaids! Very pleased you wrote about them.
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I thought you would be 😉
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Oy, I really, really enjoy your flash fiction pieces, Joanna!! 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Joyfully spun fish tale…er…tail…er…story! ❤
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🙂
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If it were my story she would have got the shock of her life when she saw a shark outrunning her and her fishtail gleaming in one last time before she disappeared in the mouth of the shark.🙃
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:O
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Yes. That’s how my heroes are. Way to go shark baby. You gotta get these elusive mermaids.😈
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Great image of a mermaid created by your words, and I’m impressed with your diligence to find a fitting photo, too.
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Thanks. Sometimes finding a suitable photo can take longer than writing the story.
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