Evening Talk (flash fiction)


Evening Talk


They sat out on the porch taking in the evening air.

“I reckon that sunset was ineffable.” Susie remarked gazing into the darkening sky. Carla looked at her puzzled.

“How could a sunset be ineffable?” Carla asked.

“Ineffable means something too great or extreme to be expressed or described in words.” replied Susie as though she was repeating something she had seen.

“You’ve been reading that dictionary again, haven’t ya?”



Joanne Fisher



Word count: 70



This was written with the prompt ineffable provided by Sammi Cox’s Weekend Writing Prompt #130.


Sorry unable to find a suitable picture of two women sitting on a porch in the evening.


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©2019 Joanne Fisher


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