Deep Waters
“It’s surprising we never became lovers. You know I’ve always had feelings for you Emma?” Michelle asked me in the cafe.
“Yeah I guessed. I have feelings for you too,” I admitted.
We looked at one another in awkward silence. We both knew it could never be. We had our own lives that seldom intersected with each other. This was the first chance meeting in a long while.
“Well I had better go,” she said. I wistfully smiled at her, not wanting to explore this any further. These were deep waters neither of us wanted to get lost in.
Joanne Fisher
Word count: 99
This is based on real life situation where a particular friend and I have acknowledged we both have feelings for one another, but that’s as far as it goes… The tone of this story was helped with a rather mournful Mahler symphony playing in the background while I was writing it.
This was written with the prompt deep waters provided by the Carrot Ranch June 11 Flash Fiction Challenge.
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That’s rough. Good story though. 🙂
I’d say go for it, BUT I did with a high school crush and it was the ultimate train wreck. Maybe go for it cautiously? LOL
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It’s not going to happen, it’s a bit more of a complicated situation.
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Sometimes having feelings for one another is not enough.
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I have the scars to prove that one. 🙂
Hang in there and keep writing 😀
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That’s a tough situation. Great take on the prompt, Joannw
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Thanks 🙂
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There’s a tension there. Water has tension- adhesion. Flow.
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Water holds emotion, and sometimes its too deep to explore. Good use of putting your own emotion and symphany into a creative flash.
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Aww, kind of sad – but understandable if you just can’t take being hurt again or making those commitments…
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Beautifully written it could happen any day. How many people feel something for each other but never speak out? Does it matter that they do if they don’t plan on taking it any further anyway? 😉
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