The Sudden Storm (flash fiction)

The Sudden Storm

Eliza, Captain of the The Crimson Night, was asleep when the squall hit. She quickly arose and staggered to the deck. The scene was complete chaos. The high winds shredded the mainsail to shreds, while the mizzen looked in danger of collapsing.

The crew desperately tried to bring the sails down as high waves crashed over them, washing some overboard. Eliza took the wheel trying to keep the ship on course, holding on to prevent being swept into the brine herself.

When morning came, the squall had blown itself out. The ship was heavily damaged, but they had survived.

Joanne Fisher

This was written with the prompt high winds provided by the Carrot Ranch September 3 Flash Fiction Challenge.

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©️2020 Joanne Fisher

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