Doppelganger
The group of friends built a bonfire. Jenny and Cass spent the evening in each other’s arms. Then Cass stood up.
“I’m going home.” Cass declared.
“Can’t you stay? We can sleep under the stars.” Jenny offered.
“I’ve got work.”
Only an hour later, Cass unexpectedly returned.
“You’ve come back?”
“Changed my mind.” Cass replied. She led Jenny away. Then Jenny’s phone rang. Tori answered.
“It’s Cass here, tell Jenny I’ve got safely home.” said the voice.
“But you came back!” Tori replied.
“No, I’m home.”
The group ran off looking for Jenny, but she was never seen again.
Joanne Fisher
This was written with the prompt of spooky tale told round a campfire provided by the Carrot Ranch October 22 Flash Fiction Challenge.
Originally this story was over 200 words. I hope cutting it back so much hasn’t hampered the narrative.
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©2020 Joanne Fisher
The wildest things seem to always happen around bonfires. Great story!
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Thanks ☺️
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Oh, that’s spooky! It has that urban legend feel about it. Well done!
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Thanks ♥️
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Textbook doppelganger tactics too. 🙂
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Yes definitely ☺️
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That is sooo creepy spooky to be fooled like that.
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