Confrontation (flash fiction)

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Confrontation

Exploring the city, Aalen was surprised by how many different races were here. There were humans, dwarves, half-people, and even some human/elf hybrids living and working together in this city.

“You Elf!” A voice suddenly called out. Aalen turned to see a group of soldiers observing her.

“You talking to me?” Aalen asked while lightly touching one of her daggers.

“What are you doing in this city?” one asked.

“Just passing through.” Aalen told them. The soldiers kept a close eye on her as they moved on.

Soon the Baron would be dead, and she would be gone from here.

Joanne Fisher

This is the third and final gap filler for Aalen’s Saga. Shortly I hope to be getting this saga ready for a short e-book. What do you think would be the best title from the following?

I. Aalen’s Saga

II. The Hunter: Aalen’s Saga

III. Aalen’s Saga: The Hunter

IV. The Hunter

Please let me know which one you like best.

Please donate! 🙂

©2020 Joanne Fisher

9 thoughts on “Confrontation (flash fiction)

  1. I like II, personally, but I think the main thing I’d encourage is to include “Aalen” in it. “The Hunter” alone sounds too vague and reminds me of this old videogame where you play a deer trying to fuck up deer hunters.

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