She Escapes
When he arrived home, he found the door to the basement was open. With his heart thudding in his ears, he quickly went down the stairs and found the cage he had kept her in was empty, the door hanging wide open. How she had escaped he had no idea. He went back upstairs. Already it was dark and quiet outside. She could be anywhere by now. He sat down on a couch and waited for the inevitable. Soon there was the sound of many sirens approaching. They wouldn’t understand that with her free, the world would soon end.
Joanne Fisher
This was written with the prompt to write a story about an open door provided by the Carrot Ranch August 5 Flash Fiction Challenge.
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Very creepy, Joanne. Well done.
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Thanks βΊοΈ
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Very nice twist there at the end also; leaving it for the reader to decide if it was his insane delusions or a real thing. π
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Yes exactly.
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Whoa! Who is she? I probably donβt want to find out. π
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Joanne the geek
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Haha. Could be…
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Now, do we believe him, or not?
On tenterhooks to find out…
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Nice twist at the end, Joanne. I want to know more. ~nan
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Well played. Perfectly creepy and suspenseful.
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Thank you βΊοΈ
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I love how you leave the reader in the balance between which one is the villain.
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Yes either he is delusional or using it as a justification, or she is dangerous… I thought it would be interesting to write it from the captors point of view.
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Uh oh.. his final thoughts are ominous, and I’m sure no one will believe him. Though whether or not he should be, is a hell of a question. If only they can answer it before the world ends. Great take on the prompt Joanne!
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Thanks β₯οΈ
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Interesting, I wonder what she is capable of.
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Haha. I like that twist.
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His world, I guess. Nice twist.
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