Ultimatum
Crimelord Slyz Bol looked at Wilya Brynla, a useful smuggler, though recently she had become unreliable.
“If you fail to give me a cut from your next shipment, I’ll make it so you’ll never be able to trade in this system ever again!”
“Fine.” said Brynla.
To his amazement she left. He had no idea she was now working with the Rebellion.
Joanne Fisher
Word count: 62
This was written with the prompt ultimatum provided by Sammi Cox’s Weekend Writing Prompt #125.
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Brilliantly penned. 🙂
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Thanks ❤
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Bum bum bum bah ba-bam bah ba-bum… BUM bum bum bah ba-bum bah ba-bum…
Name that tune!
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Hmm… Seems familiar.
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If you join the rebellion, you need to learn Darth Vader’s theme music…
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It’s actually my phone’s ringtone. True story.
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Wonderfully done!
Ultimatums rarely work!
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Thanks 🙂
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Slyz Bol. Funny. A succinctly told tale of intrigue. Cool.
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Thanks 🙂
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I got Slyz Bol – was Wilya Brynla also a pun that I didn’t get?
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No an old rpg character.
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Fantastic! Well done.
Here’s my story.
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Thanks. I liked your story too.
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Thank you!
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