The Whisperer
I lay in the dark trying to sleep, when I heard a hissing. I looked to my left and thought I could faintly see two pale points of light, like two eyes watching me. I was completely frozen with fear.
“Hello.” whispered a voice.
“Who’s there?” I asked fearfully.
“Just go to sleep.” the voice whispered again, and the soft hissing began once more and got closer.
I lay there unable to move, as my eyelids got heavier and also now voiceless, knowing I might never wake up again, and there was nothing I could do. Everything went black.
Joanne Fisher
This was written with the prompt whispering provided by the Carrot Ranch October 7 Flash Fiction Challenge.
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A visit from Kaa?
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Who or what is Kaa?
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He was the snake in the Jungle Book cartoon. “Trust in meeeeeee…”
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Yeah I had to look it up…
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Stick with me and you’ll learn a lot of useless stuff!
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Intense and mysterious. Want to know more…
🙂
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Thanks ☺️
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Creepy!
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cool
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Scary. I wouldn’t want to go to sleep.
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And sleep wins the night,
but is there morning light?
And where do we go in the darkness between?
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Yikes! Great setup to take the character from awareness to unconsciousness. That hissing is a chilling sound!
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Uh oh.. super creepy Joanne! I agree with Charli, you wrote that transition between consciousnesses really well.
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Thanks ☺️
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